The Golden Teacup by Scarlet


BOOM! Another strike of lightning bolted through the sky. Thunder rolled through the ground, waking me up. The thunderstorm kept rumbling through the night. CRASH! I ran outside to see what had happened. The thunderstorm had stopped and the sky was clear. On the lawn was a gold and white teacup. But the teacup was huge. Then it started to shine so brightly that it blinded me. When I opened my eyes I was in a completely different world.... 

 BY SCARLET 

Comments

  1. Cath Temple18 March 2018 at 04:03

    Hello Scarlet, this is a very coherent piece of writing. You have provided a lot of detail to help the reader visualise what is happening and to set the scene. It would be great to hear more about the "completely different world". Well done.

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