Coco's Wish By Scarlet

Once upon a time , on one dark, stormy night, a little   girl called Coco slowly walked up to the window of her bedroom, where her pet goldfish swam around in circles. Coco had one wish: to fly. If Coco flew she would be so happy. She sighed and went back to bed. When Coco woke up she felt a little bit  weird. She climbed down her brown bunk bed ladder and walked into the kitchen to get her breakfast. She  gobbled up her cerial and quickly got dressed. Coco climbed on top of her wardrobe and jumped. Coco could fly!                         


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  1. Mr Murphy3 March 2018 at 14:36

    Well done Coco! Could you have got to Coco flying a little sooner so you could describe it? You made use of some adjectives, which I liked.
    Mr. M. (Team 100WC)
    (Snowy) Bedfordshire, UK.

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